The Dark World III
Ryan’s alarm ringing loudly. Makes him woke up surprise. Then he turn off the alarm and return lie down to make calm him self. 5 minute, he woke up again, go to bath and have breakfast with a sandwich and chocolate milk. After that he get dress in his room. He is very handsome. Last he blast a perfume to all his body and go to work. That is ryan’s activity everyday, working very hard to chasing his dream. Ya…he has pass from high school and get job at the one of web design company. He is not anymore stay in his house but now he stay at the one of apartment in new york city.
Ryan driving his black ducati motor full speed on the road of the new york city . That is the way ryan go to work. When ryan pass the bridge Suddenly a green light falling from the sky and fall in the water. Ryan don’t know what was that but his feeling become scare. After he stop, he continue to his working place. When he arrive at his office in a second he watching tv but according to tv news, the green light from the sky is a meteor and now police and SAR team will diving to looking for what was that. Ryan knows that is not a meteor but a weird thing. 8 hour ryan work and after that he go home.
When he pass the bridge again he stop and ask to police officer what was green light and are they found it. But police officer say they are don’t found something or creature inside the water. After hear that ryan continue go home. 12 o’clock pm, a creature with a green eye with sword in his back and have a red armour walking out from the water to the road. He transformed to a very handsome guy with a black sweater and blue jeans. After watching around, no people out there see him, he jump up to one of high building there then he flying high and stop above the cloud. He close his eyes and try to feel something.
Ya….this creature searching for ryan energy. In other place, ryan woke up surprise, he feel something wrong watching him but he can’t see it. He walk to the front door, open it and walk out to see around him. Suddenly spherical destroyer energy come from his front with a flash speed. Ryan release a spherical destroyer energy too from his hand. It makes both of destroyer energy collide and blow up in the sky.
The handsome guy flying to ryan and in a second disappear. He doing teleportation and emerge in ryan’s room. Ryan turn around to see the young man, ask who is he and what is he want. Then the young man transformed back into his real form. Ryan surprised when he see that. That is roh general. Then roh general explain all what he want and what he doing in human world. Roh general tell to ryan, Ijuar evil and moyyin evil have a plan to kill him and after that want to control of the human world. Ryan so scare and surprise hear that, then he ask roh general why he come to warn him. Roh general return explain it all, in the past roh general is a human like ryan but his promise is serve ijuar evil forever. Real name of roh general is bill Harvey.
Bill Harvey is one of aniva’s student. When bill learn about devil from aniva shaman he is very interest about the strength which given by evils. In past he think after have a evil strength he can free to use it at the human world but in fact, evils just make him a key guard forever in the devil world. The evils was give him power is ijuar. Same as the evils who give ryan power of evil. After hear that, ryan understand but he don’t know how to prevent ijuar and moyyin enter the human world.
Roh general transformed back to his human form ( this is the real form of bill Harvey). Ya the handsome young man is the real human form of roh general. Then bill talk again, in fact there is one key which saved in other world of devil world. The key is can lock every door/portal to human world. Ryan don’t understand. Bill explain again, in the devils world is still a other world there. same as human planet, like earth and Pluto or Jupiter. The other world of devil world is called armur dimension. Armur dimension is very different with devil world. Armur dimension dwelt by evil beast who cannot talk, they just have kill skill and destroy ability. Nothing compassion there. they’re just evil beast.
The dragons was called by ryan when he fight with ijuar and fight with 2 guard of the key is come from armur dimension. The evil commander can command all evil beast when they enter to the devil world but can’t command if the evil commander enter to the armur dimension. All evil creatures must be silence and hiding if they enter to the armur dimension or be kill by thousand evil beast. After explain it all, ryan and bill back to the devil world to go to the armur dimension. They arrive at the black water palace so ijuar and moyyin cannot realize their arrive in the devil world. Ryan transformed become evil commander, pickup his sword to sky and spell an incantation which has been taught by bill (roh general).
A black hole emerge at sky of the devil world. That hole is a portal to enter armur dimension. Both enter to the hole. They don’t realize, they’re watch by evil sea and the evil sea will report them to ijuar and moyyin. Ijuar and moyyin success increase their power to the evil commander level strength. When they’re arrive at armur dimension, armur dimension is truly horrible than devil world. Everything there is dark and dusky. Black forest everywhere and horrible voice heard. They emerge inside the black forest and fortunately no one beast hear their arrive.
Then they flying to place called kaffar. Kaffar is a beast palace which guard by dichepalous iron dragon. Few minute they fly, they’re must hide again cause in the front 3 flying kingkong patrol around. The 3 kingkong have wings and watch every object was pass by them. After the 3 kingkong pass and fortunately not see them, they’re back again and walk slowly inside the forest. They’re don’t flying cause very difficult to hiding if there is an enemy. Ryan watch front and bill observe their back. Finally they’re success go out from the dark and horrible devil forest and finally can see the place called kaffar.
That place looks like a palace. With carefully they’re walk to kaffar. They’re very unlucky, gate of the kaffar guard by black giant wolf. Both of giant wolf is not sleeping but concentrate watching every object with their red eyes. Bill say the only way is fight them. Ryan nod, then he tell to bill, he will against both of the wolf and he told to bill to observe around them, don’t ever evil beast heard that battle. And if some evil beast heard it, bill must fight with that. Ryan walk to the giant wolf, the wolf very surprised when they see ryan. both of the giant wolf stand up and ready to attack. Both of the giant wolf open their mouth and suddenly running out destroyer energy to attack ryan. fortunately ryan can defeat that. Ryan with a flash speed run to the wolf, he transformed from the ripper to the evil commander.
He pickup his gold sword to the sky and with the flash speed swing it punch land, red energy comes from his sword, creeping above the land with the flash speed to attack both of the giant wolf. The giant wolf jump up to avoid that attack, but with the flash speed ryan jump up to the wolf nose, stab his sword to the wolf nose and split the wolf body from the front to the bottom. One more wolf, ryan flying, he spell an incantation suddenly his gold sword become 2 and flying by itself and attack the giant wolf till die with head is out. Ryan fly to catch his sword and unite his sword again. Then he pickup his hand to bill, sign that area is clear.
Bill flying to ryan and both of them opened the kaffar gate. They’re in, gate of the kaffar closed by itself. They’re confined inside the kaffar. Ryan and bill transformed to ripper and hope iron dragon can feel their arrive. Both of them walking very slowly and carefully. After walk far from kaffar gate they’re finally see the iron dragon, the guard of the key. The iron dragon is sleeping with the key hung in his neck. Both of them keep trying to get the key without rouse the iron dragon. The dragon iron is very big and very horrible. Even they must fight with the dragon, their sword can’t penetrate the dragon body which make from iron hell. Ryan walk slowly to the dragon and tell bill to stay at his hiding.
The dragon breath is very sting and warm. His claw is very sharp and his tail is truly horrify. The key is girded at his neck, very difficult to release it without using some power. But ryan must keep trying. He flying and landing above dragon shoulder. When he touch the key rope, the dragon wake up likes he feel some object touch the key rope. Ryan hiding above the dragon shoulder and trying to keep his aura not feel by the dragon. The dragon back to sit and close his eyes. Ryan continue his mission but it is truly to release the key. Bill see ryan in trouble and realize, there is an incantation to release the key from the dragon. But bill can go out from his hiding cause it will make his aura and ryan aura feel by the dragons. Bill stand up and trying to give ryan sign, so that ryan come to him.
Fortunately ryan see bill’s sign and in a minute flying to bill. After arrive at the bill hiding, bill tell to ryan there is an incatation to open the key and bill tell to ryan the incantation. Ryan heard that and memorize that incantation. Then ryan back stand up to go to the dragon, but they’re surprised when they see the dragon was lost. Maybe the dragon woke up and searching something wrong.
Ryan and bill back hiding, see their around but still can’t find the dragon. Suddenly they’re feel a wind from their above. Both of them realize and together glance up. Very unlucky, the iron dragon fly above them and try to feel some weird aura. They are keep trying to hidden but it wasn’t useless. Their aura is too big and too easly feel it by the dragon. A blue destroyer fire blast from the dragon mouth and attack both of them. They’re running away, the only way to get the key is stab the sword to the dragon eyes. Maybe it will not kill the dragon but can give a chance to steal the key. Bill flying very high and transformed to the roh general, attack the dragon with some destroyer energy from his sword. Ryan doing same thing, both of them trying to make the dragon confusing.
Bill release a few destroyer energy from his hand, it makes the dragon hunt him. This is the chance, ryan doing teleportation and emerge at his dragon shoulders, at the same time bill can’t move and looks like the dragons ready to blast some fire from his mouth. Fortunately with a flash speed ryan stab his sword to the dragon eye and make the dragon become crazy. In that situation ryan go to the dragons neck, touch the key rope, spell an incantation to open the key and success. He got the key. Ryan doing teleportation and both of them go out from kaffar but the kaffar gate won’t open, because that bill release a destroyer energy from his eyes to destroy the gate. Success…the gate destroy and both of them flying out. Ryan take his gold sword, instruct to the land and spell an incantation, a portal opened and both of them enter very fast.
Congratulation both of them succeed get the key and must be hurry back to the human world to lock forever all portal for go to human world. Both of them back opened the portal for go to human world and in. but both of them very surprised when they see one evil armada destroy the human world. And absolutely there is ijuar and moyyin which have some fun eating human and destroy all building. From ijuar’s tail and ijuar’s eyes release some horrify destroyer energy. People in new york city think they’re monster but they wrong.
No its not the monster but it is the evil. All car in the road was burn and building was destroyed. Moyyin doing some thing with ijuar. He fly high to the sky and release some destroyer energy from his hand to destroy the city. Bill and ryan thinking and first they’re must lock all portal to go human world. Ryan pick up the key to the sky, a light emerge from that key go up to the sky, ryan spell some incantation and finish. All door now is locked to prevent ijuar and moyyin call some help or call more armada from devil world.
The first job must be do is kill all evil armada. Fortunately the evil inside the armada is just weak evil. Ryan and bill can kill them all easily. Bill and ryan back transformed to the human walk to the city. They see many people hiding inside the building or their home. All people is very scared. Finally ryan see ijuar and moyyin. After they sure no people can see them, they’re flying to one of the building, transformed back to the evil knight and both of them attack the enemy. But before they do that ryan ask to bill, are you sure don’t want to increase your strength to the evil commander. Bill kept quiet and said to ryan he very scared to stab his sword to his heart, if fail he will be death and forever never meet with his family.
Ryan nod sign his understand. And then ryan promise to bill, he will protect bill after this battle finish and help bill to find his family. Now the battle begin, ryan fight with ijuar and bill fight with moyyin. Ryan flying to ijuar and release some destroyer energy from his hand. Ijuar surprised when he see ryan, then he smile and told to ryan, this is a very great battle was wait by ijuar. Ijuar flap his wing and fly to face ryan. ryan release his fire wings too.
The battle begin, Ijuar versus ryan. their speed and their strength is it at the same level. Their fight is very horrify and very fast. Sound of sword and destroyer energy has in their battle. Different with ryan, bill is very difficult fight with moyyin because their level strength is so different. Moyyin level strength is evil commander and bill level strength is general. Bill always thrown to the building and land. When ryan see bill at this condition, ryan become worried about bill. He can focus to his battle with ijuar. When ijuar see ryan, he smile and told to ryan, bill will die for nothing. Ryan become mad and focus back to his battle.
Bill power is running out, half of his armour barst. Moyyin laughing loudly see bill in condition like that. Then moyyin pickup some car and throw it to many people. Bill do teleportation to save people but bill become weak. He can’t move fast to save people. Moyyin more crazy when see bill in dying condition. He pickup some bulldozer and thrown it to a baby in the street who lost his mother. Bill do teleportation and catch that heavy bulldozer which almost kill the baby. The baby crying scared, bill cannot do anything cause he is hold 2 bulldozer at his hands. He hope any people help that baby. Rather far, moyyin instruct his hand to bill, muster up his destroyer energy to kill bill. Bill still hold the bulldozer and can’t move.
A very big destroyer energy belongs to moyyin come to him with a flash speed. With last strength bill thrown that bulldozer to the road, take his sword and punch it to his own heart, he screaming loudly cause very hurt but he still have chance to save the baby. He take the baby embrace it. He turn around so that destroyer energy punch his back. Bill and the baby thrown so far when he punch by moyyin destroyer energy, fortunately the baby is still alive but moyyin armour is very broken. Truly evil, moyyin muster up his destroyer energy again in his hand and think this time bill will be destroyed. He release the horrify destroyer energy from his hand and punch bill and the baby, hard explosions happen. Ryan surprised see that, he lost concentration and fall from the sky cause ijuar’s tail stab his left hand.
Moyyin laughing loudly with his monster voice and looking for next victim. He back pickup a very heavy truck thrown it to a little girls in the street, but before the truck punch the girl, suddenly the truck destroyed by unkown energy and saved that girl. Moyyin surprised see that and looking for who was do that. He look to ryan, but impossible ryan do that cause ryan is still fight with ijuar. Moyyin still looking for who was that and very surprised when he look up the sky.
There is bill with evil commander form, with a horrify thunder sword at his hand and the baby at his left hand. Moyyin don’t believe when he see that and now bill’s got power same as moyyin level strength. Bill fly from the sky and give the baby to people he meet. Bill spell some incantation, his sword turn to thunder whip. Moyyin become scared, but bill won’t give forgiveness to moyyin. He whipping moyyin very cruel and very fast. Moyyin screaming loudly with his chest and hand bleeding. Moyyin blood is colored black. He shield in his arm destroyed.
When ryan see bill become a evil commander, ryan smiling and woke up to fight back with ijuar. Bill transformed back his whip become sword. Moyyin take his sword too and the battle using sword is begin. But moyyin with no more powerl fall from the sky to the road. Bill pickup his sword to the sky and punch it to the road. A green energy release from his sword, creep above the road and punch moyyin. In a second moyyin die and become dust. One more enemy think bill, let ryan take care it. Ryan and ijuar now fight between buildings. Sometimes they jump and fight in the air. Some of ijuar destroyer energy succeed punch ryan and make ryan bleeding very hard. Ryan thrown his sword to the sky, spell an incantation and his sword become two.
Ryan’s sword attact ijuar by itself. Ryan targeting ijuar tail and he want to broke that. Because ijuar very busy with ryan sword which become more horrible and more strong, ryan do teleportation and emerge at the ijuar back. With a flash, ryan catch his tail and broke that with his leg. Ijuar screaming loudly cause very hurt. Ryan takes both of his sword and make it become one again. Then with flash speed punch his sword to ijuar. Ijuar dying now. Ryan flying rather far from ijuar, muster up his sword power and release it to ijuar. In a second ijuar become dust. Its all done. Ryan and bill meet at the building roof, transformed back to the human. Ryan is bleeding very hard and bill help him to go hospital.
THE END
( see below the character)
THE CHARACTERS :
Ryan
Ryan Evan Robert. is a student in high school. His age is 17 years old. Stay with his mom. His father gone since ryan still child. Since that ryan never meet his father again. His mother work at restaurant to pay ryan school. Ryan also work at fish harbor to help fisherman. His face is not ugly not handsome too. He is just simple boy. He good in playing drums and bass. Just like other boys, ryan has love somebody too. Name is irvy. Irvy is a rich girl from rich family. She is very glamour and smart. Everyone at ryan school want to talk with this girl even it once time. From looser to cool kids want irvy become their girlfriend. (in the part two ryan’s mom was died kill by the devils.)
Aniva the Shaman.
A high class shaman life in new york city. She is modern shaman. Have a good car, house, and have a beautifully son. Name of her son is ally. Just like ryan, ally’s father gone with another woman when ally still child. Aniva Thompson is her real name. many people don’t believe her cause in modern era shaman is just like a liar. She don’t care about that cause all hiding treasure can she find it with help some devils and make her become rich. Until someday she call 7 devils to help him built new empire and proof her self to world and proof it to people who don’t believe her. But that only became useless. She can’t control the 7 bad devils.
Ijuar the Devil
Ijuar is a fire devil. He keep at detsin valley to guard a book of devil strength. His form like centaur but his body have a black color. have wing like bird, his tongue from fire and tail like scorpion. at his shoulder there is darkness/death nymph. In the story I don’t write how many death / darkness nymph as ijuar’s assistant. There was 3 death nymph. They are harkmul, arksis and cissis. The death nymph in the story was meet and always help ryan is a cissis. All death nymph have form like black butterfly. Have a red eye, hold a fire spear, and their size like eagle bird. Have hand and leg. Always fly in ijuars shoulder and follow him.
Bill Harvey
Bill Jonathan Harvey is a brother of irvy also the pupil of aniva the shaman. He was lost six years ago. Actually he was not lost but stay for serve Kharmalat in the devil world. His job is guarding and protecting the key of the book of the devil strength. His parents don’t care more about bill when bill was lost. Bill was a bad boy. His parents think bill was death. bill get power from ijuar but then kharmalat ask to ijuar for give him one of ijuar’s knight for keep the key of the book of the devil strength. That is bill. Kharmalat increase bill’s power become general and give bill name. bill name is roh.
Kharmalat.
The devil who make the book of the devil strength. In all story, I didn’t not write kharmalat cause some reason. His form like a very beautiful lady. His very different with the other evil. She skin is white and all she’s clothes is white. Like a lady or a queen. But his voice like a monster and his strength is more than evil commander. She don’t have lips. She talk to the his gold heart.
The 7 devils who enter to the human world.
Traila : the leader of seven devils who enter the human world.
Markmus : lycan devils have two head. This devil was first time meet and kill by ryan.
Reritha : form like gorilla, have eye tooth, his ear big like giant bat.
Mirkmus : markmus brother but have a red color entire body.
Azurkha : like a giant bat which have head like white tiger.
Herrin : a fire gargoyle with gold shield in his arms
Moyyin : herrin brother but have a blue fire entire body and black shield in his arms.
Moyyin is the only one devil was send back to devil world (Part I) by ryan.
Thank you guys and hope you enjoy my story. Iam sorry for the bad English language cause I still learn English language. Iam sure there was many insuffiencies in my story and I hope I can fix that and I hope help from you all.