Ryan’s alarm ringing loudly. Makes him woke up surprise. Then he turn off the alarm and return lie down to make calm him self. 5 minute, he woke up again, go to bath and have breakfast with a sandwich and chocolate milk. After that he get dress in his room. He is very handsome. Last he blast a perfume to all his body and go to work. That is ryan’s activity everyday, working very hard to chasing his dream. Ya…he has pass from high school and get job at the one of web design company. He is not anymore stay in his house but now he stay at the one of apartment in new york city.

Ryan driving his black ducati motor full speed on the road of the new york city . That is the way ryan go to work. When ryan pass the bridge Suddenly a green light falling from the sky and fall in the water. Ryan don’t know what was that but his feeling become scare. After he stop, he continue to his working place. When he arrive at his office in a second he watching tv but according to tv news, the green light from the sky is a meteor and now police and SAR team will diving to looking for what was that. Ryan knows that is not a meteor but a weird thing. 8 hour ryan work and after that he go home.

When he pass the bridge again he stop and ask to police officer what was green light and are they found it. But police officer say they are don’t found something or creature inside the water. After hear that ryan continue go home. 12 o’clock pm, a creature with a green eye with sword in his back and have a red armour walking out from the water to the road. He transformed to a very handsome guy with a black sweater and blue jeans. After watching around, no people out there see him, he jump up to one of high building there then he flying high and stop above the cloud. He close his eyes and try to feel something.

Ya….this creature searching for ryan energy. In other place, ryan woke up surprise, he feel something wrong watching him but he can’t see it. He walk to the front door, open it and walk out to see around him. Suddenly spherical destroyer energy come from his front with a flash speed. Ryan release a spherical destroyer energy too from his hand. It makes both of destroyer energy collide and blow up in the sky.

The handsome guy flying to ryan and in a second disappear. He doing teleportation and emerge in ryan’s room. Ryan turn around to see the young man, ask who is he and what is he want. Then the young man transformed back into his real form. Ryan surprised when he see that. That is roh general. Then roh general explain all what he want and what he doing in human world. Roh general tell to ryan, Ijuar evil and moyyin evil have a plan to kill him and after that want to control of the human world. Ryan so scare and surprise hear that, then he ask roh general why he come to warn him. Roh general return explain it all, in the past roh general is a human like ryan but his promise is serve ijuar evil forever. Real name of roh general is bill Harvey.

Bill Harvey is one of aniva’s student. When bill learn about devil from aniva shaman he is very interest about the strength which given by evils. In past he think after have a evil strength he can free to use it at the human world but in fact, evils just make him a key guard forever in the devil world. The evils was give him power is ijuar. Same as the evils who give ryan power of evil. After hear that, ryan understand but he don’t know how to prevent ijuar and moyyin enter the human world.

Roh general transformed back to his human form ( this is the real form of bill Harvey). Ya the handsome young man is the real human form of roh general. Then bill talk again, in fact there is one key which saved in other world of devil world. The key is can lock every door/portal to human world. Ryan don’t understand. Bill explain again, in the devils world is still a other world there. same as human planet, like earth and Pluto or Jupiter. The other world of devil world is called armur dimension. Armur dimension is very different with devil world. Armur dimension dwelt by evil beast who cannot talk, they just have kill skill and destroy ability. Nothing compassion there. they’re just evil beast.

The dragons was called by ryan when he fight with ijuar and fight with 2 guard of the key is come from armur dimension. The evil commander can command all evil beast when they enter to the devil world but can’t command if the evil commander enter to the armur dimension. All evil creatures must be silence and hiding if they enter to the armur dimension or be kill by thousand evil beast. After explain it all, ryan and bill back to the devil world to go to the armur dimension. They arrive at the black water palace so ijuar and moyyin cannot realize their arrive in the devil world. Ryan transformed become evil commander, pickup his sword to sky and spell an incantation which has been taught by bill (roh general).

A black hole emerge at sky of the devil world. That hole is a portal to enter armur dimension. Both enter to the hole. They don’t realize, they’re watch by evil sea and the evil sea will report them to ijuar and moyyin. Ijuar and moyyin success increase their power to the evil commander level strength. When they’re arrive at armur dimension, armur dimension is truly horrible than devil world. Everything there is dark and dusky. Black forest everywhere and horrible voice heard. They emerge inside the black forest and fortunately no one beast hear their arrive.

Then they flying to place called kaffar. Kaffar is a beast palace which guard by dichepalous iron dragon. Few minute they fly, they’re must hide again cause in the front 3 flying kingkong patrol around. The 3 kingkong have wings and watch every object was pass by them. After the 3 kingkong pass and fortunately not see them, they’re back again and walk slowly inside the forest. They’re don’t flying cause very difficult to hiding if there is an enemy. Ryan watch front and bill observe their back. Finally they’re success go out from the dark and horrible devil forest and finally can see the place called kaffar.

That place looks like a palace. With carefully they’re walk to kaffar. They’re very unlucky, gate of the kaffar guard by black giant wolf. Both of giant wolf is not sleeping but concentrate watching every object with their red eyes. Bill say the only way is fight them. Ryan nod, then he tell to bill, he will against both of the wolf and he told to bill to observe around them, don’t ever evil beast heard that battle. And if some evil beast heard it, bill must fight with that. Ryan walk to the giant wolf, the wolf very surprised when they see ryan. both of the giant wolf stand up and ready to attack. Both of the giant wolf open their mouth and suddenly running out destroyer energy to attack ryan. fortunately ryan can defeat that. Ryan with a flash speed run to the wolf, he transformed from the ripper to the evil commander.

He pickup his gold sword to the sky and with the flash speed swing it punch land, red energy comes from his sword, creeping above the land with the flash speed to attack both of the giant wolf. The giant wolf jump up to avoid that attack, but with the flash speed ryan jump up to the wolf nose, stab his sword to the wolf nose and split the wolf body from the front to the bottom. One more wolf, ryan flying, he spell an incantation suddenly his gold sword become 2 and flying by itself and attack the giant wolf till die with head is out. Ryan fly to catch his sword and unite his sword again. Then he pickup his hand to bill, sign that area is clear.

Bill flying to ryan and both of them opened the kaffar gate. They’re in, gate of the kaffar closed by itself. They’re confined inside the kaffar. Ryan and bill transformed to ripper and hope iron dragon can feel their arrive. Both of them walking very slowly and carefully. After walk far from kaffar gate they’re finally see the iron dragon, the guard of the key. The iron dragon is sleeping with the key hung in his neck. Both of them keep trying to get the key without rouse the iron dragon. The dragon iron is very big and very horrible. Even they must fight with the dragon, their sword can’t penetrate the dragon body which make from iron hell. Ryan walk slowly to the dragon and tell bill to stay at his hiding.

The dragon breath is very sting and warm. His claw is very sharp and his tail is truly horrify. The key is girded at his neck, very difficult to release it without using some power. But ryan must keep trying. He flying and landing above dragon shoulder. When he touch the key rope, the dragon wake up likes he feel some object touch the key rope. Ryan hiding above the dragon shoulder and trying to keep his aura not feel by the dragon. The dragon back to sit and close his eyes. Ryan continue his mission but it is truly to release the key. Bill see ryan in trouble and realize, there is an incantation to release the key from the dragon. But bill can go out from his hiding cause it will make his aura and ryan aura feel by the dragons. Bill stand up and trying to give ryan sign, so that ryan come to him.

Fortunately ryan see bill’s sign and in a minute flying to bill. After arrive at the bill hiding, bill tell to ryan there is an incatation to open the key and bill tell to ryan the incantation. Ryan heard that and memorize that incantation. Then ryan back stand up to go to the dragon, but they’re surprised when they see the dragon was lost. Maybe the dragon woke up and searching something wrong.

Ryan and bill back hiding, see their around but still can’t find the dragon. Suddenly they’re feel a wind from their above. Both of them realize and together glance up. Very unlucky, the iron dragon fly above them and try to feel some weird aura. They are keep trying to hidden but it wasn’t useless. Their aura is too big and too easly feel it by the dragon. A blue destroyer fire blast from the dragon mouth and attack both of them. They’re running away, the only way to get the key is stab the sword to the dragon eyes. Maybe it will not kill the dragon but can give a chance to steal the key. Bill flying very high and transformed to the roh general, attack the dragon with some destroyer energy from his sword. Ryan doing same thing, both of them trying to make the dragon confusing.

Bill release a few destroyer energy from his hand, it makes the dragon hunt him. This is the chance, ryan doing teleportation and emerge at his dragon shoulders, at the same time bill can’t move and looks like the dragons ready to blast some fire from his mouth. Fortunately with a flash speed ryan stab his sword to the dragon eye and make the dragon become crazy. In that situation ryan go to the dragons neck, touch the key rope, spell an incantation to open the key and success. He got the key. Ryan doing teleportation and both of them go out from kaffar but the kaffar gate won’t open, because that bill release a destroyer energy from his eyes to destroy the gate. Success…the gate destroy and both of them flying out. Ryan take his gold sword, instruct to the land and spell an incantation, a portal opened and both of them enter very fast.

Congratulation both of them succeed get the key and must be hurry back to the human world to lock forever all portal for go to human world. Both of them back opened the portal for go to human world and in. but both of them very surprised when they see one evil armada destroy the human world. And absolutely there is ijuar and moyyin which have some fun eating human and destroy all building. From ijuar’s tail and ijuar’s eyes release some horrify destroyer energy. People in new york city think they’re monster but they wrong.

No its not the monster but it is the evil. All car in the road was burn and building was destroyed. Moyyin doing some thing with ijuar. He fly high to the sky and release some destroyer energy from his hand to destroy the city. Bill and ryan thinking and first they’re must lock all portal to go human world. Ryan pick up the key to the sky, a light emerge from that key go up to the sky, ryan spell some incantation and finish. All door now is locked to prevent ijuar and moyyin call some help or call more armada from devil world.

The first job must be do is kill all evil armada. Fortunately the evil inside the armada is just weak evil. Ryan and bill can kill them all easily. Bill and ryan back transformed to the human walk to the city. They see many people hiding inside the building or their home. All people is very scared. Finally ryan see ijuar and moyyin. After they sure no people can see them, they’re flying to one of the building, transformed back to the evil knight and both of them attack the enemy. But before they do that ryan ask to bill, are you sure don’t want to increase your strength to the evil commander. Bill kept quiet and said to ryan he very scared to stab his sword to his heart, if fail he will be death and forever never meet with his family.

Ryan nod sign his understand. And then ryan promise to bill, he will protect bill after this battle finish and help bill to find his family. Now the battle begin, ryan fight with ijuar and bill fight with moyyin. Ryan flying to ijuar and release some destroyer energy from his hand. Ijuar surprised when he see ryan, then he smile and told to ryan, this is a very great battle was wait by ijuar. Ijuar flap his wing and fly to face ryan. ryan release his fire wings too.

The battle begin, Ijuar versus ryan. their speed and their strength is it at the same level. Their fight is very horrify and very fast. Sound of sword and destroyer energy has in their battle. Different with ryan, bill is very difficult fight with moyyin because their level strength is so different. Moyyin level strength is evil commander and bill level strength is general. Bill always thrown to the building and land. When ryan see bill at this condition, ryan become worried about bill. He can focus to his battle with ijuar. When ijuar see ryan, he smile and told to ryan, bill will die for nothing. Ryan become mad and focus back to his battle.

Bill power is running out, half of his armour barst. Moyyin laughing loudly see bill in condition like that. Then moyyin pickup some car and throw it to many people. Bill do teleportation to save people but bill become weak. He can’t move fast to save people. Moyyin more crazy when see bill in dying condition. He pickup some bulldozer and thrown it to a baby in the street who lost his mother. Bill do teleportation and catch that heavy bulldozer which almost kill the baby. The baby crying scared, bill cannot do anything cause he is hold 2 bulldozer at his hands. He hope any people help that baby. Rather far, moyyin instruct his hand to bill, muster up his destroyer energy to kill bill. Bill still hold the bulldozer and can’t move.

A very big destroyer energy belongs to moyyin come to him with a flash speed. With last strength bill thrown that bulldozer to the road, take his sword and punch it to his own heart, he screaming loudly cause very hurt but he still have chance to save the baby. He take the baby embrace it. He turn around so that destroyer energy punch his back. Bill and the baby thrown so far when he punch by moyyin destroyer energy, fortunately the baby is still alive but moyyin armour is very broken. Truly evil, moyyin muster up his destroyer energy again in his hand and think this time bill will be destroyed. He release the horrify destroyer energy from his hand and punch bill and the baby, hard explosions happen. Ryan surprised see that, he lost concentration and fall from the sky cause ijuar’s tail stab his left hand.

Moyyin laughing loudly with his monster voice and looking for next victim. He back pickup a very heavy truck thrown it to a little girls in the street, but before the truck punch the girl, suddenly the truck destroyed by unkown energy and saved that girl. Moyyin surprised see that and looking for who was do that. He look to ryan, but impossible ryan do that cause ryan is still fight with ijuar. Moyyin still looking for who was that and very surprised when he look up the sky.

There is bill with evil commander form, with a horrify thunder sword at his hand and the baby at his left hand. Moyyin don’t believe when he see that and now bill’s got power same as moyyin level strength. Bill fly from the sky and give the baby to people he meet. Bill spell some incantation, his sword turn to thunder whip. Moyyin become scared, but bill won’t give forgiveness to moyyin. He whipping moyyin very cruel and very fast. Moyyin screaming loudly with his chest and hand bleeding. Moyyin blood is colored black. He shield in his arm destroyed.

When ryan see bill become a evil commander, ryan smiling and woke up to fight back with ijuar. Bill transformed back his whip become sword. Moyyin take his sword too and the battle using sword is begin. But moyyin with no more powerl fall from the sky to the road. Bill pickup his sword to the sky and punch it to the road. A green energy release from his sword, creep above the road and punch moyyin. In a second moyyin die and become dust. One more enemy think bill, let ryan take care it. Ryan and ijuar now fight between buildings. Sometimes they jump and fight in the air. Some of ijuar destroyer energy succeed punch ryan and make ryan bleeding very hard. Ryan thrown his sword to the sky, spell an incantation and his sword become two.

Ryan’s sword attact ijuar by itself. Ryan targeting ijuar tail and he want to broke that. Because ijuar very busy with ryan sword which become more horrible and more strong, ryan do teleportation and emerge at the ijuar back. With a flash, ryan catch his tail and broke that with his leg. Ijuar screaming loudly cause very hurt. Ryan takes both of his sword and make it become one again. Then with flash speed punch his sword to ijuar. Ijuar dying now. Ryan flying rather far from ijuar, muster up his sword power and release it to ijuar. In a second ijuar become dust. Its all done. Ryan and bill meet at the building roof, transformed back to the human. Ryan is bleeding very hard and bill help him to go hospital.

THE END

( see below the character)

THE CHARACTERS :

Ryan

Ryan Evan Robert. is a student in high school. His age is 17 years old. Stay with his mom. His father gone since ryan still child. Since that ryan never meet his father again. His mother work at restaurant to pay ryan school. Ryan also work at fish harbor to help fisherman. His face is not ugly not handsome too. He is just simple boy. He good in playing drums and bass. Just like other boys, ryan has love somebody too. Name is irvy. Irvy is a rich girl from rich family. She is very glamour and smart. Everyone at ryan school want to talk with this girl even it once time. From looser to cool kids want irvy become their girlfriend. (in the part two ryan’s mom was died kill by the devils.)

Aniva the Shaman.

A high class shaman life in new york city. She is modern shaman. Have a good car, house, and have a beautifully son. Name of her son is ally. Just like ryan, ally’s father gone with another woman when ally still child. Aniva Thompson is her real name. many people don’t believe her cause in modern era shaman is just like a liar. She don’t care about that cause all hiding treasure can she find it with help some devils and make her become rich. Until someday she call 7 devils to help him built new empire and proof her self to world and proof it to people who don’t believe her. But that only became useless. She can’t control the 7 bad devils.

Ijuar the Devil

Ijuar is a fire devil. He keep at detsin valley to guard a book of devil strength. His form like centaur but his body have a black color. have wing like bird, his tongue from fire and tail like scorpion. at his shoulder there is darkness/death nymph. In the story I don’t write how many death / darkness nymph as ijuar’s assistant. There was 3 death nymph. They are harkmul, arksis and cissis. The death nymph in the story was meet and always help ryan is a cissis. All death nymph have form like black butterfly. Have a red eye, hold a fire spear, and their size like eagle bird. Have hand and leg. Always fly in ijuars shoulder and follow him.

Bill Harvey

Bill Jonathan Harvey is a brother of irvy also the pupil of aniva the shaman. He was lost six years ago. Actually he was not lost but stay for serve Kharmalat in the devil world. His job is guarding and protecting the key of the book of the devil strength. His parents don’t care more about bill when bill was lost. Bill was a bad boy. His parents think bill was death. bill get power from ijuar but then kharmalat ask to ijuar for give him one of ijuar’s knight for keep the key of the book of the devil strength. That is bill. Kharmalat increase bill’s power become general and give bill name. bill name is roh.

Kharmalat.

The devil who make the book of the devil strength. In all story, I didn’t not write kharmalat cause some reason. His form like a very beautiful lady. His very different with the other evil. She skin is white and all she’s clothes is white. Like a lady or a queen. But his voice like a monster and his strength is more than evil commander. She don’t have lips. She talk to the his gold heart.

The 7 devils who enter to the human world.

Traila : the leader of seven devils who enter the human world.

Markmus : lycan devils have two head. This devil was first time meet and kill by ryan.

Reritha : form like gorilla, have eye tooth, his ear big like giant bat.

Mirkmus : markmus brother but have a red color entire body.

Azurkha : like a giant bat which have head like white tiger.

Herrin : a fire gargoyle with gold shield in his arms

Moyyin : herrin brother but have a blue fire entire body and black shield in his arms.

Moyyin is the only one devil was send back to devil world (Part I) by ryan.

Thank you guys and hope you enjoy my story. Iam sorry for the bad English language cause I still learn English language. Iam sure there was many insuffiencies in my story and I hope I can fix that and I hope help from you all.

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Rain in new york city. trees, grass and plants become fresh with situation like that. Ryan that just come back from school shelter under empty bus station. Raindrop catch up / tack his face that chilled. He forgets bring jacket from his house. then Ryan take chicken sandwich from his bag and eat it. This is the favorite food ryan and must made by himself. He very like his brand sandwich because have specific taste, different with existing sandwich in supermarket.

At the same time munch that sandwich, he huddle ups his bag in order to give warm in his body. Seems he is not alone anymore after he see a girl runs to empty bus station. Ryan slit his eyes “oh no, that irvy, why she alone? What happen with her, where is her boyfriend?” said ryan in his heart. irvy arrives wet in that bus station. See ryan In a flash and then look away to neaten her clothes and slap down rain in his hair. Then she sit rather far from ryan and then bowed. It’s likely she is sad and hungry.

Ryan anxious to talk with no.1 girls in his school but he nervous and he afraid maybe that girl predict him a guy who want to be a hero in that situation. Ryan anxious for give him jacket or cape but he don’t have. Finally he invite that girl talking. . “hi, irvy” ryan make him self dare to talk first. Irvy lift his head, his eye press outs, looks like she so sad. She turn around to see ryan and smiling and say “hi, ryan”. ryan surprised know that girl know his name. but he wouldn’t ask that girl where she know his name. and ryan don’t want to ask her why she is so sad, perhaps later that girl think ryan a guy become a hero in front of sad girl. Ryan take two sandwich from his bag and give it to that girl (irvy). “eat this sandwich irvy, it can give warm to your body” said ryan.

Irvy takes one and eat it. His face changes surprised and said “wow this sandwich is very delicious, where you buy this ?”. then ryan said “I make it”. “this is a very different and delicious sandwich I ever eat” irvy said. Ryan said “thank you”. “can I take this one ?” irvy ask ryan and want to take ryan sandwich again. Ryan said “please, just eat”. Irvy take it and eat it with looks like shes very hungry. The rain now alleviate. Only drizzle fall from the sky. I gonna go now said ryan. where you going said irvy. I have go to work. Maybe fishermen already wait me. Ohhhh….be careful ryan and thank for the sandwich. Ryan smiling and said “your welcome”. He don’t realize irvy stare his departure till he disappear in corner street. Irvy call taxy and give his home address for go home.

Has not yet ryan walk to port, cloud in the sky become black and transform into a monster face and watching ryan. and the same time in ryan front emerge black nymph have red eye and hold of fire spear ( this is a death nymph). Nymph said to ryan “ hi knight, you’ve called by ijuar to keep your promises. Ryan surprised, he almost forget his promises to ijuar 1 year ago. Which the promise is to serve ijuar for one century. “Do I have to go now” said ryan. then the nymph say “you don’t have to go now, tonight 12 o’clock fly to west until no people can see you and raise your hand to the sky and we will open portal to our world (devils world). Ryan nod sign he is understand. The nymph disappear and the clouds turn to normal again. Ryan continue walk and go to harbor for work. After ryan arrive at harbor, he work for 4 hour. Today is not many fishermen go to the sea cause its rainy day. Wave on the sea can be very big.

After work, ryan go to home, eat and rest for a moment. In other place, irvy remember ryan. ryan can give him happy for a moment even not truly know him. 12 o’clock ryan wake up cause his alarm ringing loudly. Now ryan stay alone in his house. No more family. They’re dead because horrible event one year later cause by devils. Now no more in ryan mind, he even don’t think himself , think friend or someone who love him. Now he must keep his promise to ijuar and become knight for ijuar. He stand besides his bed, reading a incantation. Ryan’s eyes become red, slowly his body transform to evil knight / ijuar’s army. He never use this power for 1 year. Ryan is not show off people type. Ryan jump up in the building and releases his fire wing. He fly to the west with very beautiful fire wing and disappear in a flash.

Devils world is very horrible if look from the sky. That’s ryan see when he fly go to the detsin valley to meet ijuar. Some devils in form white snake and red snake see ryan fly in the sky of devil world with fire wings and running scared. Ijuar has wait him when he arrive at detsin valley. Ijuar said “hi my knight how do you do”. Ryan knee and return stand up, “iam fine my lord”. One year ago you promise to me to serve me for one century. Now I will give you a very hard tasks. Devil world is like your world too. Wide and live many kind of devils. One of powerful evil is me but there is too many devils king which more powerful than me.

The book of evil strength is truly still save a lot of secret of devils strength but it is actually locked and I cant opened by my self. The key for open it is guard by one evil general and two evil commander. They’re can kill me easily with just one time release his destroyer spherical power from their hand. Their speed like thousand flash and their have been read and learn all of part of the book of evil strength. Iam very anxious for get the secret key but with my power like this the guard can easily kill me. That’s why I call you as my knight and your mission is get the key and return here with alive. That key looks like a white pearl with red light.

Like that, ijuar explain all and surely make ryan scared. But he must keep his promise and agree with that tasks. Then ryan ask to ijuar is it with his power he can defeat of all guard and get that key. Then ijuar said again “human race which learn the book of evil strength can increase his power if their heart become black. More black of human heart more power too they get. To become like that you must forget the beautiful moment of your life and love with other human, be cruel and ruthlessly. Ryan hear that all, return knee and take leave for getting done his mission.

Now he jump up, release his fire wing and go fly to the black water palace. The place where 3 guard keep the key of book of evil strength. The black water palace located at black sea of devil world. The palace is exactly reside in center of the black sea and float above the sea. In the black sea itself dwelt many water horrible evil monster. When ryan almost arrive at the black water palace, two fire ball move like a flash attact him. But easily ryan avoid and hit back with his flicking fire wings which can release a fire tongue with flash speed. suddenly attack from black water palace stop and ryan continue go to the palace and lands at the palace gate.

Truly very high gate and terrible. All palace exactly black and dusky. Then suddenly the gate open by it self and show inside that palace. Ryan walk to palace yard, its so silent like no other there. but ryan don’t know, he is following by a white horse ghost from his back He just realized that when his sword red blaze colored sign there is something is his back and that is not dangerous. He look back but the white horse ghost is still silent and won’t move. Ryan think no problem that is not dangerous.

He continue walking to the palace door and look his around, his sword gold blaze if his around there is something dangerous. Finally he arrive at the palace door, and the white horse ghost just disappear. Then he push the door with his hand, when the door opened its very dark there, like no light. Ryan spell some incantation to release his fire wing and make that room become light. There’s nothing bizzare from that front palace room. Ryan’s eyes which blaze red watching every object and looking for white pearl have a rose blaze but there is no one object like object his looking for. even this place very silent.

Because ryan become boring he clench his hand and instruct it to his front, A red destroyer spherical energy emerge at his arm, more grow and with a flash speed release to front. Likely nothing happen. Nothing object was destroy and burn. He reply again and attack every object and room in that palace room but once again nothing happen.

Suddenly his sword blaze gold sign there is something dangerous around him. Exactly, there is something stand at the doorstep, his eyes blaze green but can’t see his body because he stand in the dark. Then the green eyes laugh loudly like a monster laugh, he fly to ryan. ryan clench his both hand, ready to attack if this creature close to him. “ripper!!!” that creature talk with loudly voice. Ryan surprised and ask who are he and why he called ryan ripper. That creature introduce him self, he is a roh general, one from 3 guard who keep the key is him. Then he explain ripper is a human being who become child/helper of ijuar devil. Then ryan begin talk too, he explain he is not a child of ijuar, he just only keep his promise. Then roh general explain in the devils world there is no promise, you cannot just believe evil, roh general laugh.

You’ve been lied. Since thousand year ago ijuar always send his army to get the key of the book but they’re always died in my hand. The power of the rippers is nothing if compare with evils general like me. Ryan surprised hear that. You will not get away from here ripper. Even I release you and come back to ijuar, he will kill you because you fail and absolutely you cannot defeat him.

Ryan desperate hear that. Then ryan said again “my promise is take the key, even I died here no more people care about me because all my family was died”. Roh general surprised hear that then he tell some secret to ryan “ the keys of increase ripper power is how you sure your heart that you are not afraid to die, don’t you lose your love and mercy from your heart it is not true. Just be a ripper who not afraid to die”. “ let us get fight and don’t afraid to die if you want your power increase to next level” said roh general.

And the battle begin, roh general is truly very strong, with one hand he can defense and attack back with a flash speed. Suddenly the palace become light when every torch in the wall blaze. In fact, there is 3 throne and still 2 evil commander there sit calm watching the battle. Their eyes white blaze sign they’re commander. A level of devils strength can see from their blaze eyes.

Red sign they are ripper, green sign they are general or have power same as general and white sign they are war commander of the devils. War commander is the higher level of devils strength. Now is clearly and light that room. And can see so clearly the face of the general and the commander. All or Their tooth is very sharp. And their entire body wrapped red dusky hell armour. The battle was still continued very hard. Each of them take their sword and fight with that, but ryan still loose. Actually in his mind he still thinking meet with irvy. The girl from ryan’s school. That think is make ryan loose his battle with roh general. His armour and his mask broken cause attack of roh general.

Then roh general talk and open some secret to ryan “hey ripper this is a secret of all general, if you want your power level increase like me, you must stab your heart with your sword. If your sword choose you as a true evil knight then you will alive but if your sword not choose you, you will die and your spirits will be stay forever in the devils world. Sword of the devils can choose their master who can be a evil knight and who cannot be. You must do that or you will die in my hand. At least I give u choose, you die in your own hand better than you die in my own hand and maybe if you lucky, you will alive and your power will be increase to the next level of evil power”.

Ryan just hear that all and back attack roh general with his destroyer energy from his sword and his arm. But that all to easy for roh general, he can hold with just one hand. Ryan’s power is running out when roh general instruct his sword for release a flash destroyer energy to kill and destroy ryan’s body. Fortunately roh general still give ryan last chance to choose, die in roh general hand or die in his own hand.

After thinking that all and desperate in bleeding situation, ryan finally choose to die in own hand by stab his heart with his sword. He think, if he do that maybe he still have a chance to alive or die in his own hand better than die in enemy hand. Ryan pick up his sword, spell some incantation and his sword turn to a big, heavy, very sharp with fire tongue in around it. And with loudly screaming, he stab his heart with his sword. In a second ryan fall in knee with his sword penetrate his heart, “just like other” think roh general then he fly to his throne, close his eyes and back sleep to keep the key. Torch in the wall begin extinguish.

Its so weird when the last torch almost extinguish, ryan dead body was lost don’t know where. The 3 guard become so mad, they feel some very terrible power but its not come from inside the palace but come from outside this palace. Roh general check every room and every corner room but his cannot find ryan’s body. Two evil war commander which have name destra war commander and agima war commander fly outside the palace to check where come from that terrible power. It is true, unknown creature with a very big fire wings fly there with gold sword in form so artistic, horrible, sharp and big at his arm.

That is ryan, he has transformed in a new form. He is not a ripper anymore but now he become a war commander. His eyes blaze white with an black armour and mask. His hair have color black mix with silver, long and straight. Without platitude, ryan invite them (2 war commander) to fight in the air/sky. 2 evil commander more – more mad and with flash speed they attack ryan. fortunately ryan power and speed same with they. He now can fight in good, strong, more powerfull and flash speed with them. Ryan and two war commander fight with their sword. Destroyer energy thrown everywhere. Sword swing which follow by killer energy from the sword also enliven the battle of evil war commander.

Looks like ryan’s power better than and more powerfull than his enemy. And ryan’s sword made from gold, very different with his enemy’s sword. Ryan pick up his right hand, 2 black dragon down from darkness sky of devil world and hunt cruel the 2 evil war commander. Looks like the enemy very hardly face it. Now both of evil war commander become so mad, in a second they spell some incantation, face each other and suddenly their become one. Ya…they unite become one. Now they are in form a big monster bat with a red spears in his arm which can release fire blast from his mouth. the body become so horrible, terrible and powerfull.

Both of the dragon was attack him destroyed easily with fire blast from his mouth. Ryan very surprised see that. Now ryan’s turn fight very hardly with that monster bat. Several times ryan thrown and fall to sea of devils world but he fly again to fight with his enemy. Fire blast attack from his enemy mouth feel burn the sky, it is so warm. Looks like their battle watch by evils sea which become very fear. The battle with spears and sword is begin. And looks like the monsters spears is very strong and sharp. Ryan very surprised when his sword can hurt the monster body.

That monster even laugh loudly when ryan sword can hurt him. Ryan think and the only hope is call more dragons so he can get a chance to grab the enemy spears and stab the enemy with his own spears. Now ryan call 5 dragons to help him. 5 black dragon release from darkness sky and blast more fire from his mouth but easily kill and destroyed by the bat monster. Ryan flying rather far from his enemy and release a spherical destroyer energy from his sword to attacking the monster.

That monster become mad when ryan attack hit them. He turn around and take more power and thrown his spears to ryan. that red spears come with a flash speed and hurt ryan left hand but then ryan don’t mind that and in a second doing teleportation to hunt the spears from behind. He success catch that spears. Unfortunately the red spears is very heavy, he cannot thrown it to stab the monster. then he call 10 red dragons to help him confusing the attention of the monster. Unfortunately Call more dragons can decrease ryan’s power. 10 red dragon release from the darkness sky and attack that monster. Looks like the monster fighting very hard battle with 10 dragon which more powerfull than before.

At the same time ryan doing teleportation, emerge at the front of the monster and with a flash, stab the spears into monster chest. Too late to realize that, that monster now screaming loudly and become weakness. The monster body is burned and turn to dust after ryan release a red destroyer energy from his sword. “Finish” think ryan. with a flash speed he going to the black water palace to get the key.

At the palace is waiting roh general which scared when he see ryan turn to a evil war commander. But ryan didn’t kill him, he just ask for him to give it the key. Roh general takes the key and give it to ryan. Ryan takes the key and say to roh general, he will not kill roh general because roh general was give ryan chance to choose. After getting the key, ryan transformed to ripper so that ijuar not suspect to him. Then he flying to detsin valley, place of ijuar resident to give the key to ijuar or maybe kill ijuar by self.

When he arrive at the detsin valley and meet ijuar, immediately he give the key to ijuar. Fortunately, ijuar give ryan a honor to see opening of the book of evil strength which saving under ijuar’s stomach. Then ijuar take a black pearl under his stomach and tell to ryan this is the book of the evil strength. Immediately ijuar spell an incantation, unite the black pearl and white pearl and suddenly emerge a black hole (a portal). Ijuar going in and tell to ryan to follow him.

When they enter to the portal, suddenly they arrive in a place like palace but at his wall many bizarre word and font there. ijuar tell to ryan this is the content of the book of the evil strength and at the wall it is written the secrets. Ijuar reading at all suddenly his eyes blaze white and in a second his power increase to war commander level. Now ijuar power level same as ryan power level that is evil war commander. They are finish and going out to back at the detsin valley. Then ryan make himself dare and ask to ijuar why ijuar lie to ryan and explain all in fact there is so many human become ripper and die for nothing.

Their spirits just fly away in the devil world because can’t come back to human world and go to the sky. After ryan explain it all, ijuar laugh loudly and tell “human being is a fool creature. Very easily to make him become slavery of the evils. Ryan hear that all and take a bow. Suddenly he increase his power level to war commander and makes all devils creature around him fear. Ijuar very surprised see that, looks like he saw his death. Ryan pick up his hand to the sky and call 10 destroyer dragon. Release 10 red dragon from the sky and flying around ryan waiting for command.

When ijuar want ask for help too, with a flash speed ryan attack him with destroyer energy from his hand and command all dragon to burn ijuar. Ijuar is very too late to realize that. He now fall to pieces and have no more powers. Ryan take the book of the evil strength and the key then he destroy it. Destroy ijuar’s throne and command all dragons to burn all detsin valley. Now ijuar is only commander without any power. Ryan didn’t kill him cause ryan remember ijuar was give him a power.

After ryan open portal to human world and instruct black butterfly to human world. Black butterfly is a human spirits who perverted at the devil world. After all human spirits enter to the human world and go to the sky, ryan enter to the portal too but before that he tell to ijuar “iam not your knight anymore and this is a devil world, nothing promises here”. After that ryan enter to the portal and closed it. He fly in the sky, watch human spirits flying up to the sky. Now ryan can sleep and more rest. In the way home ryan enjoy the city from the sky. It is very beautifully.

THE END

A high-class shaman called aniva intentionally open portal to devil world and call 7 cruel evil to help her govern world and built new empire. the shaman is predict can control of the 7 devil but truly, she is wrong. she only exploit by devils to open portal to human world. she is even also killed by the devil.

after know that there is 7th devil step into human world then shamans from all world join to defeat them. but they’re fail, they only unnecessarily dust. further till one young man that without intentionally find note and black book of shaman aniva.

he reads all note and black book of shaman aniva till finally he finds a solution experiment. that young man is not a shaman but a student that coincidence run from devil fury that now dwell in new york city. fortunately he quick learns and listen carefully. he immediately perform a ceremony opening portal to the Devil world to steal book of devil strength that kept under Ijuar stomach. Ijuar is fire devil who keep the book of devil strength.

When that young man enter into devil world, is chilled and horrified there. all completely dusky. only laugh and devil weep that heard. cloud in the sky in form of monster watcher. All guidance and protector in devil world is complete in the black book of shaman aniva.

In that book quite complete how he must shelters, many incantation, till way to meet ijuar completely there. after that young man faces various of barricade and events bizzare like meet the sinner dead man, peep devils eats human sin and see very horrible fire palace of devil he finally come up with a place called Detsin. Detsin is a dale, place of ijuar guard the book of devil strength.

when that young man go down to the detsin valley, smelly blood and full of ghost in form black butterfly, that young man tremble when he see ijuar. ijuars form is like centaur but have wing like bird and his body have black color, its tongue from fire and tail like scorpion. at his shoulder there is darkness/death nymph that fly as assistant and ijuar stands up above a stone as its the throne.

ijuar is high-class devil and can smell human attendance in his place. ijuar sends its darkness nymph meet that young man. that young man confused and tremor increased feared when black nymph have red eye and hold of fire spear emerges in his front.

that nymph says “what your intention and desire enter Devil world and visit our place (detsin)”. Then that young man tell about 7th Devils step into human world and destroy everything. that young man also tell his purpose, that is borrow the book of devil strength to send back all 7^th devils that was entered in human world. after tell his purposes then the nymph reports to ijuar about all that young man told. ijuar smiles and says to ryan (name of that young man) “hey human you cannot open the book of devil strength, your body will fall to pieces and burned” when he heard that, ryan so sad last hope he said “whatever you want ijuar I will do it for save my world from Darkness and ruination”.

ijuar kept quiet for a moment and then smiled and say “I will teach you half of book of devil strengths but with one requirement, i wish you serve to me for 1 century” mindlessly ryan tells yes sign that he ready serve him for 1 century. “you serve to me for 1century not as guard or hunt devils in the world but that still secret for you” says ijuar.

This is the last hope think ryan and he says again “whatever you want ijuar my lord for save my world”. ijuar nods and then kept quiet, its mouth mumbles spell a incantation and suddenly emerge 2 devil in form like ijuar. ryan then lifted by itself to ijuar throne and lied down. with sharp nail in his finger ijuar move his hand to ryan chest like want to claw. Then emerge a red light ball in his palm and penetrate ryan chest. Ryan scream because painfulness but entire body can’t move.

around 30 minute that happen. After that, ryan faint and wake up at place where he perform his ceremony. Like a dream when he remember all and likely nothing change at himself.

without a thought he immediately go to new york city to save alive people at there. All people confine in new york city and there’s nothing can run away if they won’t their body burned. Half of new york city already protected by using a terrible incantation / charm devil destroyer. All people confine in their house, building and town.

Ryan walking carefully every passing building of city . ryan step into middle road, suddenly a blue energy spherical punches that road. he thrown but not injured and painfulness. one devil like lycan but have 2 head emerges, his fur in entire body colored black, his hand and body very strong and have very sharp claw in his finger. in his forefinger of right hand there is a fly small blue energy spherical, following his every finger move and ready to attack his enemy.

ryan wake up, the devil smiling and instructs his finger to ryan, sphere energy in his finger grows and with flash speed attack ryan but from behind ryan a red energy emerges arrive and block that devils attack which can be hit ryan. the devil surprised, ryan more surprised. Both of them searching where come from that spherical red energy. and then the devil realizes there is a thing fly in the sky. That is death nymph, staff of ijuar. the death nymph down from the sky and stands up overshadow ryan and deal with the devil lycan. the devil surprised and says “what your target enters to the human world and protect that human”.

“this human is Ijuar’s army, he will kill if you and other 7 devils who enter to the human world not immediately leave human world”. the devil laugh with fearless voice then said “I will not leave human world before I eat all heart of baby cause can give longevity”. “so if like that not my business if this Ijuar’s army kill you and destroy all of your friends ” death nymph said. death nymph turn around to ryan, the nymph whispers something to ryan’s ear and afterwards death nymph flies to sky and disappear.

“I will enslave and kill you” the devil said. “you can try” ryan said.

ryan spell superstitious word, likely has been advised by the nymph and directly he transform. his hair becomes length to his bottom and become straight, colored black dusky, his face is closed by black iron mask, have a black wing which can be fire wing, all bodies close over by black iron hell, his body becomes strong and muscular. a sword now is available at his back.

with a flash speed that devil jump and dash against ryan that now has transformed be ijuar’s army . but easily ryan strangles the devil neck and throw it to one of building, ryan fist his arm and instruct it to the devil, a spherical red energy exits from his fist and attack awfully the devil that was thrown. the devil blubbers painfulness like ask help. but likely no more hope after ryan’s sword split his body became two and at once become dust.

After that, ryan keeps its sword returns on his back and fly away to the sky, searching every devil that have gallivanted. there is still six devil that he must return to them world or annihilated them. ryan flies higher and surprised when he see the city now has gone to pieces. New york city becomes die and burned. nothing activity at all. Ryan became so mad and back flies into the new york city.

in his searching around new york city, ryan has been annihilate four devils easily, so there is two more devils, that is their leader and one more staff . ryan see his around but nothing sign of them at all and then he saw the place of devils confine life human that catch by them. Some of the people maybe still hiding but sooner or later the devil will find and annihilate all of them. The Devils only lets people life who will follow the order the devils and became slave of devils.

Ryan visit that place and try to destroy shield of that place with his spherical energy. that shield dome-shaped and close over half of new york city. Last Ryan releases its sword and swing it to that shield but that shield remain not move or react. When he start desperate cause cannot penetrate that shield then again emerge in his front death nymph.

The nymph explains to ryan that this shield is made by the leader of seven devils. For destroy it must kill the Devils leader. Ryan then ask to the death nymph how to kill the leader whereas devils leader exists inside that shield. last nymph says “devils leader not inside that shield, only its staff exists inside but the devils leader resides above at dome, sit and close his eye to searching and feel human energy”.

The nymph disappears and ryan directly flies upwards the dome and finally see the devils leader named traila . Traila is the leader seven Devils who enter to the human world, his form like female and his body become two parts. left body have a color of silver mix with gold color, his left eye have a white color whereas right body have a color like blue fire, his right eye like eagle eye and have rose colored. his hair is fire that raveled beautiful in his shoulder with very terrible flames.

Ryan flies slow to traila. Traila open his eyes, his aura become very horrible. Traila opens his mouth and from inside trailas mouth emerge blue thunder ball ready to attack ryan. Ryan stops but he still fly and ready to against that thunder ball. But have not yet take a breath that blue thunder ball glide as flash and punch ryan and thrown far distant bump building. Traila laughs, suddenly a big red energy emerge very fast and can be hit traila if she not quickly move. That was ryan.

Traila become so mad and from the distance ryan flies and again release the destroyer energy from his arms. Traila flash moving and go fly. From inside his body, traila release a sword that have horrible form. That Sword have blue color, big, and very sharp. Traila lifts his sword to the sky and swing it very fast to ryan. A destroyer blue energy exits from his sword and punch ryan.

ryan fall headfirst and bleeds in his chest. Very fast and killer energy, think ryan. Traila said “if you can hold my sword attack energy so we can fight with our sword”. Then ryan release sword from his back and read a incantation. His sword turns into weight, big, sharp and horrible with fire lick surrounding. Last he sway it quickly, and a red energy emerge from the sword and punch traila. Traila so mad and flew up to ryan with flash speed. Unsheathe his sword and fight with ryan. their fight very skilful, with sometime their release a very fear energy to attacking each other.

Trailas fire hair can easily burn ryan if he not quickly move. Even trailas eye can release light kills if ryan stare it. Ryan injures hard. Without platitude traila lifts his right hand to sky, the cloud in the sky turns into monster that grimace ryan and once in a while release thunder tongue to attack ryan. but ryan can arrest it with his sword although his body became hurt and hardly.

Ryan flies around quickly to avoid that thunder tongue. If continued like this condition ryan will die. Ryan just realizes that his sword can bounce that thunder tongue. Meanwhile traila busy controls the monster cloud, ryan awaits big enough thunder tongue. Ryan laugh very hard and tell to traila that thunder tongue very sucks. Trailas face changes angry then she read a superstitious word, cloud that at first in form of monster now turn into form of thunder maelstrom.

A very big blue color thunder tongue emerge from that thunder maelstrom and quickly attack ryan. ryan are realize, then quickly he lift his sword, arrest that energy for a moment at his sword and bounce it to traila. To late traila to realize that, traila now injures very hard and some of her bodies fallen to pieces.

Ryan instructs his sword to traila, a big enough red energy emerges from ryan’s sword and scorch traila’s body. Fall to pieces and become dust. Monster cloud has losed and shield that close over city also has been annihilate. Stay one more devil, that is just small things . that is true, when ryan searching and find him want to eating a baby, that devil look fear. Without platitude, ryan flies to that devil quickly, strangle his neck and throw sky, ryan open the door of devil world and send back that devils.

Now world has been safe and city has been rebuilt. Ryan very happy on although no body know him . One point that still become ryan mind that is wait for ijuar call for getting duty from him.

THE END

The 7 devils who enter to the human world.

Traila : the leader of seven devils who enter the human world.

Markmus : lycan devils have two head. This devil was first time meet and kill by ryan.

Reritha : form like gorilla, have eye tooth, his ear big like giant bat.

Mirkmus : markmus brother but have a red color entire body.

Azurkha : like a giant bat which have head like white tiger.

Herrin : a fire gargoyle with gold shield in his arms

Moyyin : herrin brother but have a blue fire entire body and black shield in his arms.

Moyyin is the only one devils was send back to devil world by ryan.

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